in
the Fix capitalization
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beginning
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beginning,
i'm
going to discuss with you about employers and their attention Fix capitalization
I'm
about
the way their employees dress ,
first of all , i agree about employers paying attention about their employees dressing , because their are a few outfits that doesn't match with working evironment , Change preposition
to
such
as sweat pants and certain sweaters , we should Linking Words
respect
our working place and our co workers especially the employer , because simply if he doesn't like the way you dress , he will fire you and find someone who fill your place , Use synonyms
however
, employers should Linking Words
respect
their employees and give them thier personal space if its match their working environment
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On the other hand
, i disagree with the saying [ the Linking Words
quality
of the work is the most important thing ] , there are many things Use synonyms
that is
more important Linking Words
then
work Linking Words
quality
, Use synonyms
such
as employee morals with his co workers and his Linking Words
respect
for them at least that what i believe in , there are many kinds of people , there is the person who is a hard worker but with no Use synonyms
respect
to others and himself , and there is who Use synonyms
respect
people and they love him but he don't care about his job
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Finally
, what you wear or what you look like is important Linking Words
of
course Punctuation problem
, of
but
it's not more important than your manners and your job Punctuation problem
, but
quality
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, we
must but to ourselves Punctuation problem
. We
a
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apply
balanced
plan between our comfort and our job Replace the word
balance
quality
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