The graph shows the number of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The graph shows the number of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph shows the number of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The graph illustrates the
number
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of adolescents in the UK
were
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who were
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vegetarian
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vegetarians
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from 1960 to 2020.
Overall
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, the highest percentage of vegetarians was
showed
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shown
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in 1980,
while
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the lowest was in 1960. In 1960, none of
teenagers
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the teenagers
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were interested in
vegetarian
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vegetarianism
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.
However
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, more and more of them tried to follow
healthy
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a healthy
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diet
becoming
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, becoming
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a
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apply
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vegetarian
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vegetarians
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and
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, and
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10 years later, it was recorded that around 5% of them decided to become
vegetarian
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vegetarians
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. The
number
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of
follower
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followers
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this
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of this
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healthy diet increased to approximately 10%,
then
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dramatically
climbing
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climbed
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, reaching a peak
,
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apply
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at
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of
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over 15% in 1980. From
this
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year, the
figured
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figure
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started declining to over 6% in 1990. By 2000, the
number
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of the UK's adolescents who were vegetarian
recorded
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had
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back to 5%,
it
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and it
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gradually went up, after experiencing a fluctuation trend.
This
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trend kept rising by over 10% in 2010. After a decade,
the
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apply
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the
number
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remained relatively stable. The percentage was lower by about 5% than in the
1980's
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1980s
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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