IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 1

what shuold the government do to protect the environment?

In recent years, the responsibility
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that
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the
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 government
should do
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to protect the environment has been a topic of interest.
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 some might hold the belief that the government should me recommendations and
popularize
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 knowledge about protecting
environment
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the environment
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. The following essay will shed light on these viewpoints. On the one hand,
this
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 is essential to acknowledge the significant advantages associated with some projects to residents can improve self-awareness. A critical consideration is that measures can improve plastic and enhance awareness
to
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of
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 protecting
environment
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the environment
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 and improve public transport.
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, environmental protection propaganda in rural and urban areas, which highlights
that reduce
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reducing
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 plastic and
co2
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CO2
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 air.
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, another important point to
emphasize
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emphasise
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 is that we should invest in more renewable energy and
some
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apply
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solar panels,
save
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and save
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 fossil fuels.

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structure
Make a clear plan before you write. Put a short intro with your main idea and a clear ending.
stance
Give one side or view, then a view from the other side. State your own view clearly.
examples
Give real and full examples. Show how the idea would work in real life.
content
Some ideas on energy save and less plastic.
content
The note on energy is seen in the plan.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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