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Students hand writing quality is lower than any other times In your opinion, what are the reasons? And what can be done to overcome this issue ?

Nowadays, the
quality
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 of students'
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 is lower compared with the
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last
 decades. In my opinion,
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due to
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 that they do not rely on
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 as much as in the past.
However
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, there are many
method
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 to enhance their writing,
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 as
practicing
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practising
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.
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,
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 prime reason which
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this
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issue
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 is
the
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that
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 pupils today and people in general
prone
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are prone
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 to
use
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 whether the digital keyboard that they can find in
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smartphones
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 or the regular keyboard that they
use
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it
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to write
in
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on
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 computers.
these
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keyborads
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keyboards
 depend on clicks
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, not
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 on the
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 a result, the
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start
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be
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 useless
and
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 it is rare to
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 it.
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 reason
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 a fundamental role in
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 down the
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 majors.
For example
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, in the past, the student was working to enhance their writing
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 before getting the exams, by now, the
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majority
 of tests
have become
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are taken
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 on computers or smart gadgets.
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,
before
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in
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some
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the
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years
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past
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, when people
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 to take notes or save something important, they wrote it in the agenda or notebooks, which is good
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 for their
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.
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Nevertheless
, in the current decade, they
use
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 modern
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systems
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, which
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 their time and
keep
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keeps
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 their information well.
On the other
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hand
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, to tackle
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issue
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, the teachers should work to involve students
in particular
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activites
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activities
, which
are
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include
tranining
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training
 their
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.
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, in Iraq during 2022, the Ministry of Education did a
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successful
 contest which
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 about the
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fastest
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, and they included the
quality
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in addition
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, there
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a
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rewards for the top ten winners.
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the
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students
be
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 into
the
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 and
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 hard to improve
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their
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 writing skills.
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,
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also
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consider
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as
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a family matter, the parents should
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collaborate
 to
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improve
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 their
children
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children's
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 writing
quality
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.
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this
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 can be done
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by
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 playing some related games with them, which are
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to address
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at addressing
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 their
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issue
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 greatly.
in
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 conclusion, the gadgets have
the
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 detrimental
affects
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effect
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 on our ability to
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hand
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hands
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 in writing, which can be
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this
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 effects by
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appealing to
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 the eduction
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organisation
 to
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 new methods to
make sure
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ensure
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 the students can
useing
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use
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write
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 in
best
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 way and clearly.

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structure
Plan a clear plan for the essay. Put the cause in one part and the fix in the next.
organization
Have one main idea in each paragraph and keep it simple.
grammar
Fix grammar and spelling. Use short, plain sentence to be easy to read.
content
Give more real examples and show steps to fix the issue at school, home, and with rules.
structure
There is a clear last part that sums up.
idea
There are some good ideas on why the writing goes down and how to fix it.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital technology
  • note-taking
  • curriculum
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Math)
  • handwriting practice
  • teacher training
  • adequately
  • prioritizing
  • parental influence
  • modeling behavior
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