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Some people think the best way to learn new things is to study them alone. Others think that it is always better to get help from a skilled teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your choice.

Study
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 is one of the important
things
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 in our
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 life, and everyone has their
own's
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own
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 skill to do
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. Some people's opinion is
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that letting
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 them alone to
study
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 can get the best
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grade
. When they are alone, the world
become
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becomes
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 quiet, they can
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concentrate
 on their
study
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. Try to
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imagine
 a
sitruation
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situation
, you are in a
quieting
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 room, you can not hear any crowd sounds, no one can talk to you,
no
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nothing
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things
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 can find you. At that time, you must feel peace, safe and
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concentrate
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, you can learn it in your method, your rhythm, your space. And
then
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 you will get the best effect. But some people
has
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the
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another
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anther
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apply
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method to
study
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. They believe the best way to
study
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 new
things
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 is to get help from a skill
teather
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teacher
. When we
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 new
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, we always feel strange, we
don
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do
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 not know what we should do at the beginning. If there
is
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apply
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a
skillful
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 people who can teach us how to do
this
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, we will feel at ease. Especially the teacher can make a comprehensive
study
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 plan
to
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 us. That will achieve twice the result with half the effort. In my opinion, both of the two methods mentioned above are excellent learning approaches,
they
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be used
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 in different stages of
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. A peaceful
enviroment
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environment
 is suitable for previewing before class or reviewing after class. In the middle stage between the two, if we can learn from an
ecperienced
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experienced
 teacher, it will enable us to achieve the maximum learning effect.
In addition
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 to learning new knowledge and skills ourselves, we can
also
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 hear the cognition and viewpoints of others. It helps us to have a more comprehensive cognition and understanding.

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structure
Open with a clear view of your answer and say what two ideas you will give. Then show your plan in one line.
language
Use simple, correct sentences. Check spell and spacing.
structure
Add a clear intro and a short ending that restate your view.
content
You show need to lay out both sides and your own view.
coherence
You give one real example how a quiet room can help study.

Fully explain your ideas

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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