The bar graphs below show the number of houses built in the UK between 2010 and 2020.

The bar graphs below show the number of houses built in the UK between 2010 and 2020.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar graphs below show the number of houses built in the UK between 2010 and 2020.
The line graph illustrates the number of four different types of houses constructed in the UK from 2010 to 2020.
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, it was clear that the terrace was the dominant kind of house. During the decade, the flat had drastically changed, which
rose
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obviously of all
the
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types.
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, both detached and semi-detached had similar trends in ten years. In 2010, the terrace was by far higher than other categories, reaching 2600.
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, the number of detached was the second highest in
this
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time, approximately 1700. The quantity of semi-detached had as many as
flat
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, which was between 1000 and 1500. Throughout ten years, the trend of terraces increased steadily, reaching the peak of 2800
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2018, it fell slightly
around
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100. Noticeably, the flat climbed rapidly from 1100 to 2700, which became the major type of
houses
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house
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in 2020.
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, detached and semi-detached declined significantly, from 1700 to 1400 and from 1300 to 1000.
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both of those remained stable after 2018.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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