The graph below shows people's level of satisfaction with the health care system in 4 countries between 1991 and 2007

The graph below shows people's level of satisfaction with the health care system in 4 countries between 1991 and 2007
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows people's level of satisfaction with the health care system in 4 countries between 1991 and 2007
The given line graph represents the comparison of the people’s level of
satisfaction
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with the health
care
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system
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in 4 countries in Canada,
UK
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the UK
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,
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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and
US
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the US
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over a period of 16 years from 1991 to 2007.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that there
was
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were
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considerably
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fell
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apply
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changes
of
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in
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the citizens
level
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'
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satisfaction
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with the
healthy
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healthcare
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care
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system
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between Canada and
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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. The opposite trend was true in
UK
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the UK
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and
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, and
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US
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the US
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had a fluctuation
slowly
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, slowly
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climbed. In
term
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of Canada,
The
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the
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number of
satisfaction
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with the health
care
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system
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fell around 40% from 1991 to 1998,
then
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rose rapidly
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, double
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double
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from 20% to 40% in the following 9 years in 2007. Without exception,
The
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Netherlands increased slightly around 3% from 1991 to 1998, after
dropped
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dropping
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steadily around 5% by 2007. In
UK
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the UK
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, from 1991 to
2007
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2007,
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the number of
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satisfaction
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people satisfied
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with the health
care
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system
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of the people experienced a flew from
slighty
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slight
from
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increase from
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about 20% to nearly
approx
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apply
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30%.
Besides
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,
The
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the
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US mostly insignificantly grew just around 3% from 1998 to 2007.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words satisfaction, care, system with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • satisfaction level
  • comparative analysis
  • steady increase/decrease
  • fluctuation
  • health policy
  • government spending
  • global health crisis
  • public health initiatives
  • perception
  • speculation
  • historical data
  • implications
  • trends
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