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The maps below show the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the main changes which have taken place in Pebbleton between 20 years ago and today.
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, what stands out from the maps is that Pebbleton has become more residential and comfortable, with more facilities and
houses
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. As the maps show, there were no changes with the school
which
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, which
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 is located in the southern part.
Also
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, the lighthouse, which is situated on the west-north side, did not experience any alteration.
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, with Lighthouse Lane, Old Ford Road, the playing field and the road bridge When it comes to transformations, were a lot.
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, twenty years ago, there was a film studio which is converted into flats. The old ford near the lighthouse has been converted into a children’s playground. Next to it, a community centre has been constructed. Under it, the tennis court has
also
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 been built. Another change was
houses
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 beside the sea
,
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;
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 there were 4
houses
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, but now the number of
houses
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 has almost doubled to 7
houses
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words houses with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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