The pie charts below show the changes in the percentage of people taking different courses at a college in Canada.

The pie charts below show the changes in the percentage of people taking different courses at a college in Canada.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show the changes in the percentage of people taking different courses at a college in Canada.
The pie graphs illustrate the proportion of
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students who took six majors at a particular college in Canada in 2000 and 2006.
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, the percentages demonstrate a noticeable shift in engineering courses,
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pharmacy and medical technology declined over
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time. Chemical engineering comprised
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20% in the first year
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showed only a very slight increase of about a mere 1% to 21% in 2006.
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, in 2000, geodetic engineering received 8%, which rose marginally to 10% 6 years later. Notably, most pupils took civil and mechanical engineering courses in 2006. To be specific, 27% accounted for civil engineering in 2006,
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to only 15% in 2000.
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, just 16% of students who took mechanical engineering in 2000,
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figure experienced dramatic growth to 25% in the final year. Pharmacy and medical technology,
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,
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declined in the number of people from
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and 16% in 200 to 7% and 10%, respectively. Another point is that, in
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there
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equal
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proportion of
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students in both chemical engineering and pharmacy courses, at
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.

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