The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map compares the structure of the harbour in 2000 and how it is built today.

Overall

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,many units have been added and replaced,

such

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as the cafes and shops,

in addition

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to the showers and toilets breathe hotel ,and numerous number of

boats

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. On the western

side

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, the harbour in 2000

consists

Wrong verb form

consisted

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of one shower and toilet space.

Tow

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Two

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car parks are private

marina

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marinas

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for yachts and one fishing

boats

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space

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apply

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However

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, things have changed since 2000. The western

side

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now contains a double of the shower and toilet units next to the car parking area. The fishing boat space and the marine have switched places. On the north eastern

side

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, only one dock is placed between the

boats

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, but today another dock

have

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has

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been added near it

as a result

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the increasing number of

boats

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. In the south eastern

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side

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side,

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a new spot for cafes and shops

have

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has

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been added

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in addition

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, the disused castle has been replaced with a new hotel.

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grammar

Fix grammar and spelling mistakes. Use the right verb form and make plurals match.

coherence

Use clear topic sentences in each paragraph and connect ideas with simple linking words.

task response

Describe the features in a clear order. Stick to the facts shown on the map and avoid extra ideas.

vocabulary

Use simple, common words and avoid hard phrases. Check word choice so it is easy to understand.

task response

The idea of comparing 2000 and today is clear.

coherence

There is a basic layout with an overall idea given at the start.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

164 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

harbour (or harbor)
docks
shipping lanes
warehouses
recreational areas
infrastructure
additions
removals
facilities
environmental sustainability
economic impact
local community
capacity
technological advancements
industrial shipping
recreational use
surrounding infrastructure

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