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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The recycling
process
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 of
plastic
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 bottles is shown by the illustrations that elaborate on all nine
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stage
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stages
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 of
circular
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the circular
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process
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. The first eye-catching matter is that
every thing
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everything
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 starts from consumers; their circular-supporting culture helps
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process
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the process
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 to work.
At the first
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stage
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stage,
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 consumers put their
plastic
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trashes
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trash
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 in the
Plastic
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 Recycling bins
and
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, and
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 they are gathered by special trucks
over
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throughout
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 the city,
then
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 sent to
recycling
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the recycling
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center
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centre
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. At the third
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stage
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stage,
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 they are sorted based on
final
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the final
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 recycled product and
be
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apply
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compressed into
plastic
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 blocks. Afterwards, the blocks are crushed and washed to make sure
do
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they do
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 not carry any
pllutant
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pollutants
 and are purified. The sixth
stage
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contains
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involves
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 producing
plastic
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 pellets from washed
plastic
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 pieces.
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Then
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Then,
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plastic
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 pellets are heated to form raw material. In the
last
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stage
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 of recycling
plastic
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 blocks as
row
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raw
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 material
willl
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will
 be
destribute
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distributed
 to the manufacturing factories, which end up
with
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apply
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producing
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plastic based
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plastic-based
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 products. But
this
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 circular
process
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do
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does
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 not end up; with ending the product life
time
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time,
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 they will be sent to
Plastic
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 Recycling bins and the
process
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 will repeat again.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, plastic, stage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 0 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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