The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Two maps are depicted of the Norbiton
city
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city,
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where one shows the current state of it and the latter
illustrating
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illustrates
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the upcoming scheme for the
neighborhood
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neighbourhood
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. From the two
pictures
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pictures,
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it can be seen that the once industrial site will become a
residental
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residential
place for people to live.
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the river will be divided into two parts by a road crossing it and reaching the square. Housing opportunities will be added on both sides of the water, as
famers
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farmers
can make houses near their fields. It is shown that all the companies are being replaced by personal properties.
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, public
faculties
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facilities
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including shops and medical centres will be constructed around the square, and there will
also
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be
an
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a
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school on the east side of the map. These are made to make life more convenient.
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Also
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there will be a playground for kids, near the school,
at
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on
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the opposite side of the farmland
to
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, to
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make children have fun and make the best out of their life after education time.
This
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can be a perfect idea as it can expand housing areas and make life easier for
suburbans
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suburbanites
.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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