The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Two maps are depicted of the Norbiton

city

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city,

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where one shows the current state of it and the latter

illustrating

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illustrates

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the upcoming scheme for the

neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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. From the two

pictures

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pictures,

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it can be seen that the once industrial site will become a

residental

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residential

place for people to live.

First,

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the river will be divided into two parts by a road crossing it and reaching the square. Housing opportunities will be added on both sides of the water, as

famers

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farmers

can make houses near their fields. It is shown that all the companies are being replaced by personal properties.

Additionally

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, public

faculties

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facilities

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including shops and medical centres will be constructed around the square, and there will

also

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school on the east side of the map. These are made to make life more convenient.

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Also

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there will be a playground for kids, near the school,

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the opposite side of the farmland

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, to

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make children have fun and make the best out of their life after education time.

This

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can be a perfect idea as it can expand housing areas and make life easier for

suburbans

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suburbanites

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Sep 28, 2025

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

186 words

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The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

With a growing world population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In mordern times, children are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. 1. Why has this change occured? 2. Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

Some people claim that governments should take action to ensure that people have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, disagree and believe that people should decide for themselves which way they prefer to live their lives. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Nowadays youngsters are less polite and less respectful than in the past. What do you think are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this issue?