People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less?

Nowadays, residents are drinking more and more sugar-based
drinks
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.
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by many reasons and
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many ways to solve. On the one hand, it's a
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of occasions for the subjects. The first reason is
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there are so many types of
drinks
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on the market. Cityzen have so many options to buy and
drink
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, which inadvertently leads to people gradually not liking to
drink
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water.
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, there are so many types of
drinks
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on the market today, diverse in types,
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and
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.
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, in recent years, the number of new
drink
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products launched has increased by 15%. The second reason is that the
drinks
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are sold at low prices and are easily accessible to all ages.
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, sugary
drinks
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in Vietnam are sold at low prices
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such
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as Coca Cola sold for only 10,000 VND, Red Dragon energy
drink
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sold for 5,000 VND
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are very popular in convenience stores nationwide.
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, there are many solutions to
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problem.
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we need to raise awareness among students in schools. We need to educate about the diseases that sugary
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can cause
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as diabetes, high cholesterol and if consumed in excess, can cause cancer. The second reason is that the government can increase the tax on sugary
drinks
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. When the tax is increased, the price of these products will be raised, thereby limiting the number of buyers and
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the amount consumed. In short, we need to raise people's awareness of the harmful effects of consuming too many sugary
drinks
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and find solutions to limit the consumption of these products.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sugar-based
  • drinks
  • taste
  • refreshing
  • enjoyable
  • marketing
  • advertise
  • cool
  • desirable
  • energy
  • tired
  • boost
  • social events
  • gatherings
  • parties
  • celebrations
  • choose
  • quick
  • common
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