The line chart illustrates the number of overseas travellers to
Japan
for three purposesUse synonyms
:
business, holiday, and Punctuation problem
:
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visit
friends from 1990 to 2010.
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visiting
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, business was the main reason for visitors in the period, but it and holiday Linking Words
purpose
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purposes
were
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apply
fluctauted
. Correct your spelling
fluctuated
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friends was the most unimportant issue to Wrong verb form
Visiting
Japan
at the Use synonyms
inital
. Correct your spelling
beginning
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However
it grew rapidly during the next two decades.
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However,
1990
above 6 Punctuation problem
1990,
million
visitors came to Use synonyms
Japan
for business, Use synonyms
it
boosted to around 9.5 Correct word choice
and it
million
by 2000. Use synonyms
While
it dropped to almost 8 Linking Words
millon
in 2005. Correct your spelling
million
Then
a modest increase to roughly 9 Linking Words
million
visitors in 2010. There were around 5.5 Use synonyms
million
tourists Use synonyms
came
to Correct pronoun usage
who came
Japan
for Use synonyms
holiday
. Correct article usage
a holiday
Although
it had a slight decline to 4 Linking Words
million
between 1990 and 1995, Use synonyms
which
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it
met
its lowest point. It had a significant growth over the next ten years, ending with 7 Verb problem
reached
million
.
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By contrast
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visit
friends was the reason that Replace the word
visiting
least
people Correct word choice
the fewest
visit
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Japan
. But it grew steeply to 7 Use synonyms
million
over the next 15 years, and had a slight decrease to above 6 Use synonyms
million
in the end.Use synonyms