In the past, people usually stayed in one place throughout their life. These days, people often move around. They often live in several different places in their life time. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both?

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tend to leave now, because
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easy,
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to the
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were
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there is
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transportion
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transportation
,
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in the past
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people
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used to be stable in
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place
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and based
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their
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they do not want to leave it, for different reasons.
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both of them
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there
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own
benifts
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benefits
.
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, with the
peresnt
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present
,
human
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now can
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travel
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easily
useing
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using
plans
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planes
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, cars, trains, and even ships to move around,
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in the
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there were only animals
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as
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camels
and horses
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was hard to
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or transport around the world in the past or in your area
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for many reasons. First the lack of information , why i will move to
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that i do not know about it anything, second the world now are more safer than the past,
people
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used to be afraid with they
travel
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,
last
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point is the opportunity to find a stable
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to live, now anyone who what better jobs he had to move to the best cities around the world to get increase in the salary or to enjoy them lives,
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in the past everyting you would need is around you.
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, there is much benifts of staying in
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place
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like what they have used to do in the past, some of the
people
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are forced to
travel
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or leave their own home, for serval reasons, like looking for better life, escape from death or pvorety, or the lack option that they have, staying in
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place
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as kid growing in that area can have great impact in the person, to like and love the soil he rise on, to have identity to know the history of the
land
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and what
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land
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mean to him or his greatparents. I always believed that
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had to love
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land
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and consider it as it's property, to develop it to build it and for sure
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protect
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his
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land
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. In conclusion,
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is our planet, but human likes to own and
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to discover.

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