The map shows the present layout of an post building and plans for its future redevelopment.

The map shows the present layout of an post building and plans for its future redevelopment.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map shows the present layout of an post building and plans for its future redevelopment.
The maps present data on the current layout of a post building and how it is planned to be developed.
Overall
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, the
area
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is expected to become more suitable for business, with the introduction of meeting areas. It is
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clearly visible that some recreational facilities are going to be demolished. Currently, there are two long grass areas on the east and west sides of the office. Moving to the south, four office blocks are located adjacent to each other, forming a line near the entrance to the right corner. It is notable that all the food facilities are located to the north, starting from the kitchen on the left, the canteen in the middle, and the storeroom on the right. Next to the storeroom is a water closet.
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, on the west side, in the middle, there can be seen another entrance, connecting the grass
area
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to the main hall. In the future, the grass
area
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on the left is going to be replaced by outdoor seating areas and some chairs,
while
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the one on the right will be knocked down
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in its place will be a meeting
area
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and some chairs
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the bottom. The new coffee machine is expected to be placed on the north-east corner, next to which the water closet is moved. The main entrance will be relocated to the centre of the bottom , and every 2 adjacent offices are going to be connected.
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there will office
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of the kitchen and canteen on top, the storeroom will remain unchanged.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • map
  • present
  • future
  • plan
  • building
  • post office
  • area
  • space
  • room
  • entrance
  • exit
  • door
  • window
  • car park
  • parking
  • yard
  • road
  • path
  • sign
  • counter
  • desk
  • staff
  • customer
  • service
  • work
  • time
  • crowd
  • line
  • bigger
  • new
  • old
  • safe
  • easy
  • clear
  • open
  • bright
  • design
  • build
  • change
  • improve
  • add
  • extend
  • phase
  • cost
  • traffic
  • noise
  • safety
  • access
  • people
  • move
  • area
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