The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph illustrates the proportions of consumption of teenagers' fast food in Australia from 1975 to 2000.

Overall

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, fish and chips

was

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were

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the most common food, and

pizza

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and

hamburgers

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were not well known and

least

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the least

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popular when the survey started.

However

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, the popularity of fish and

chip

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chips

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experienced a sharp decline

while

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pizza

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and

hamburgers

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' numbers increased significantly throughout the years.

It is clear that

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fish and chips were popular and were eaten more than a hundred

times

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a year in 1975. The proportions experienced fluctuations until 1985;

however

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, it

droped

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dropped

sharply to less than 40

times

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in 2000.

On the other hand

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pizza

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and

hamburgers

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started from close to 0 time in 1975, and

hamburgers

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number increased to over 80

times

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in 1985 and kept growing for 15 years, and in 2000, it was eaten more than 100

times

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teeagers

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teenagers

. Hamburger became the most popular fast food

among

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apply

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all

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apply

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roughly from 1987.

Pizza

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number

also

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enjoyed a sharp rise from close to 0

time

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times

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to over 80

time

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times

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in 1995.

However

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, it remained stable afterwards until 2000.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, hamburgers, times with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

180 words

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preference
frequency
trend
popularity
notably
anomaly
dominant
contrast
exhibit
proportion
category
significant
rate
margin
predominant
marginally
substantial
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The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are with an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract local people? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Although it is generally illegal, physical punishment continues in many countries. Some argue that parents should have the right to punish their children in this way. Do you agree or disagree?