The map show a change of coastal town, called Petland, from 1950 to 2007

The maps illustrate how a coastal city called Petland has developed over a period of 57 years.
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,what stands out from the graph is that there has been a significant development in terms of entertainment facilities and residential areas. In the year 1950, there were two main roads which intersected each other in the centre.One of them ran from the south of the site to the north of the
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. To the west of it,there was an industrial
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and
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grassland was situated in the southeast of the city.The other road led to the parking lot
which
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was situated in the west of the town.
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the top of the city,there was
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large sea which occupied almost the
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northern part
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of the
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. In 2007,the industrial
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was demolished to make way for a multi-storey car park and above it, a swimming pool was constructed
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well as a park.Along each side of both roads ,a number of shops were erected
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to the south of the town ,many houses were built
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well as a cinema.Next to the coast of the sea ,a few apartments were constructed.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • coast
  • beach
  • town
  • harbor
  • road
  • house
  • houses
  • shop
  • shops
  • park
  • field
  • farm
  • water
  • map
  • year
  • grow
  • build
  • built
  • change
  • expand
  • develop
  • replace
  • new
  • old
  • more
  • less
  • along
  • near
  • center
  • edge
  • fishing
  • tourists
  • people
  • area
  • land
  • sea
  • bay
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