The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the recycling percentages of 4 types of resources between 1982 and 2010 in a nation. Paper and cardboard, glass containers, aluminium cans and plastics are the types of
recyclbles
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recyclables
selected in the data. It can be seen that glass containers, plastics and aluminium cans had an increasing trend of recycling rate,
while
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that of paper and cardboard dropped.
Although
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the recycling proportion of glass items dropped by 10% between 1982 and 1990, it
then
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sharply
rised
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rose
back to 50% in 1990. In the coming 16
years
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, the recycling
rates
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increased
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steadily every four
years
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. In 2010%, a percentage of 60% was recorded.
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no data is presented in 1982 for aluminium cans,
The
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recycling rate consistently increased from 1968 to 2010, of which the increase of proportion between 2002 and 2010 was the most
drastical
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dramatic
, recording a 10% growth of rate every four
years
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. The change
of
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recycling
rates
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of plastics was relatively slower since it remained below 10% between the 20-year period of 1990 and 2010.
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, the recycling percentage of paper and cardboard seemed to drop. Despite the significant growth of
rates
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from 1990 to 1994, their
rates
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slowly diminished in the following 16
years
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from 80% to 70%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, rates with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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