You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive at the destination. Write a letter to the post office manager. In your letter, •give details of the situation •describe the documents •say what action you want the post office to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am
writting
Correct your spelling
writing
this
letter to tell you about the Linking Words
documents
that did not get to you recently.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, Linking Words
last
week I already sent you some Linking Words
documents
about the Use synonyms
cashflow
by Use the right word
cash flow
the
post. But, yesterday the post Correct article usage
apply
tell
me that the Wrong verb form
told
documents
Use synonyms
are
delivered to Wrong verb form
were
wrong
destination.
The Correct article usage
the wrong
documents
that I want to send to you Use synonyms
is
the cashflow of Correct subject-verb agreement
are
company
Correct article usage
the company
last
month. There is good news after I finished Linking Words
set
the Wrong verb form
setting
cashflow
. The good news Use the right word
cash flow
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Linking Words
last
month the company Correct word choice
that last
make
almost 10 million rupiah profit. So, I think the boss Wrong verb form
made
is
must be happy about the news.
Verb problem
apply
However
, today the Linking Words
documents
are saved in the post office. So, I already told them to Use synonyms
sent
the Wrong verb form
send
documents
tomorrow morning and they will not Use synonyms
sent
Wrong verb form
send
to
Correct pronoun usage
them to
wrong
address again. BecauseCorrect article usage
the wrong
,
I already double Punctuation problem
apply
check
the destination Wrong verb form
checked
and
maybe you will Punctuation problem
, and
received
the Wrong verb form
receive
documents
on Monday.
I am Use synonyms
writting
for your prompt response
Your sincerely,
MikhaelCorrect your spelling
writing
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tone
Polite tone and polite start.
content
The letter states the issue and a plan to fix.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite