You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive at the destination. Write a letter to the post office manager. In your letter, •give details of the situation •describe the documents •say what action you want the post office to take

Dear Sir or Madam, I am
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writing
this
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letter to tell you about the
documents
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that did not get to you recently.
To begin
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with,
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week I already sent you some
documents
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about the
cashflow
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by
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post. But, yesterday the post
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me that the
documents
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are
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delivered to
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the wrong
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destination. The
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that I want to send to you
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are
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the cashflow of
company
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the company
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last
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month. There is good news after I finished
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setting
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the
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. The good news
are
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last
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that last
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month the company
make
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almost 10 million rupiah profit. So, I think the boss
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must be happy about the news.
However
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, today the
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are saved in the post office. So, I already told them to
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the
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tomorrow morning and they will not
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send
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to
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them to
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wrong
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the wrong
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address again. Because
,
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apply
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I already double
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checked
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the destination
and
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, and
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maybe you will
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receive
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the
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on Monday. I am
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writing
for your prompt response Your sincerely, Mikhael

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tone
Polite tone and polite start.
content
The letter states the issue and a plan to fix.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
Topic Vocabulary:
  • postal service
  • registered mail
  • tracking number
  • envelope
  • urgent
  • confidential
  • compensation
  • investigation
  • documentation
  • destination
  • customer service
  • resolution
  • discrepancy
  • correspondence
  • delivery
  • timeline
  • claim
  • follow-up
  • liability
  • accountability
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