The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart demonstrated
reasons
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the reasons
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of
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for
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global
land
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degradation and the table illustrated the causes of
lan
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land
degradation in three regions in
1990s
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the 1990s
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. It is obvious that the main causes of
land
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degradtion
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degradation
were over-grazing, over-cultivation and deforestation, where
Europe
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had the
higest
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highest
degraded
land
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among
other
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the other
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two regions. In the pie graph, Over-grazing caused 35% of
land
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to be
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degraded
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internationally, followed by deforestation
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, 30
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% and over-cultivation
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, which
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was 28%. Other reasons
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resulted seven
percent
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per cent
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of damage. In the table, deforestation (9.8% )
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was the
key reason why
land
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degraded in
Europe
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,
also
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more than five times greater than
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in North
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America (0.2%) and Oceania (1.7%). In the overly cultivated sector, it impacted 7.7% of
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in
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Europe
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, which was nearly double
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the percentage
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than
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in
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the
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North America. Surprisingly, Over-cultivation was not related to
land
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degrafation
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degradation
in the Oceanic region.
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, the
land
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degration
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degradation
in
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Oceania was majorly caused by
overly grazed
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overgrazing
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(11.3%), which is extremely larger than the other two regions. In total, North America had only
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five
percent
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per cent
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of
land
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degradation.
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Europe
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and
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Oceania had respectively 23% and 13%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words land, europe with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pie chart
  • Table
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Decreasing productivity
  • Reasons
  • Regional variations
  • Data
  • Summarize
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