The pie charts below show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in 1990 and 2010

The pie charts below show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in 1990 and 2010
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in 1990 and 2010
The two pie charts illustrate the percentage distribution of
electricity
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production by different fuel sources in France for the years 1990 and 2010. The most notable
overall
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trend is the significant increase in the share of nuclear
power
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, which became the dominant source of
electricity
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in 2010. It is
also
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evident that coal and oil have declined over the past 20 years
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gas has decreased sevenfold. In 1990, the most widely used fuel source was coal, accounting for 28% of
electricity
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production.
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was followed closely by natural gas at 28%. Oil made up 22% of the total,
while
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nuclear
power
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contributed 17%. Hydro
power
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had the smallest share at just 6%. By 2010, nuclear
power
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had become the dominant source of
electricity
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, rising significantly to 63%.
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, the use of coal fell to 13%, and oil dropped sharply to just 10%. The share of natural gas experienced a slight decline to 4%, and hydro
power
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decreased
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to only 2%. In summary,between 1990 and 2010, the importance of nuclear energy in
electricity
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production in France increased,
while
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the shares of other sources declined significantly.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, power with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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