In several
countries
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countries,
children
are more connected to particular paid Use synonyms
works
. It is argued that some people believe these phenomena are common, Fix the agreement mistake
work
while
others consider Linking Words
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this is
inappropriate for youth. I believe Verb problem
it
children
have to complete their major Use synonyms
education
rather than Use synonyms
attached
to Verb problem
be attached
child
labour at Use synonyms
early
Correct article usage
an early
ages
.
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age
To begin
with, Linking Words
is
mandatory for a Correct pronoun usage
it is
child
to Use synonyms
accomplished
main Verb problem
complete their
education
at Use synonyms
early
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an early
ages
. Fix the agreement mistake
age
Education
is important for them because it can assist them Use synonyms
to establish
Change preposition
in establishing
critical-thinking
, social, and cultural life for their futures. Use the right word
critical thinking
For example
, Linking Words
children
should obtain proper lessons Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
mathematic
, biology, science to develop their knowledge, and some Replace the word
mathematics
sport
lessons to improve their physical health. Fix the agreement mistake
sports
Hence
, when Linking Words
become
adults, they Correct pronoun usage
they become
able
to solve major problems as Verb problem
are able
employee
. Fix the agreement mistake
employees
In addition
, Linking Words
high
skilled Replace the word
highly
labours
will gain Use the right word
labourers
more
Correct word choice
higher
salary
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salaries
rather
than unskilled Rephrase
apply
labour
.
Use the right word
labourers
Secondly
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
child-labour
has many disadvantages for Use the right word
child labour
children
and Use synonyms
government
. Correct article usage
the government
If
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Child labourers
child
-labour are vulnerable Use synonyms
with
work Change preposition
to
accident
because they lack Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
of
cognitiveChange preposition
apply
,
and socio-cultural Punctuation problem
apply
education
. Use synonyms
For Instance
, recently in IndonesiaLinking Words
–
a building accident occurred in Punctuation problem
,
east java
because the contractor Fix capitalization
East Java
hires
unskilled Wrong verb form
hired
children
to construct the building. Local authority reported, the reason why Use synonyms
contractor
hire Fix the agreement mistake
contractors
youth-labour
is Use the right word
youth labour
because
they can save more money. Change preposition
that
Although
the criminal will gain punishment, Linking Words
government
will lose Correct article usage
the government
people
trust because they neglected these phenomena.
In conclusion, Check wording
people's
early aged
Correct word choice
young
child
should obtain mandatory Use synonyms
education
Use synonyms
for
elevate their physical and emotional skills. In order to reduce and mitigate these dangerous activities, Change preposition
to
government
should build specific Correct article usage
the government
regulation
to protect Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
children
from Use synonyms
child
labour, and punish the Use synonyms
criminal
.Fix the agreement mistake
criminals