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Band 4

Space explorations cost taxpayers an exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantages of spending money on space explorations?

Use synonyms
space
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Space
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exploratins
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exploration
 is
cirical
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critical
santiftic
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scientific
 progress
but
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, but
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is
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it is
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expinsive
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expensive
 and funded by
taxpayes
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taxpayers
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. This
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this
Linking Words
 essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages advantages
the
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Space
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space
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 exploration
it
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apply
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is
benfint
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beneficial
 in
tthe teconlogey
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the technology
ant
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and
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improve
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improves
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 health
in
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In
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 education
the
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, the
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 more
invintive
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innovative
 and
santiftic
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scientific
 progress disadvantages
you
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You
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 need huge amounts f many
this
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 makes
poor
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the poor
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more
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poorer
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 poring
a
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A
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 lot
people
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of people
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they
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apply
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go to
the
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apply
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space
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 but
no
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don't
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 come back
from
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to
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 earth concloision
the
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Space
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space
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 exploration
its
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is
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 nice
and
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, and
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 enjoy
whover
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whoever
binfint
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benefits
 for
humen
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humans
but
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, but
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 you need
amount
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a lot of
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 money
i
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. I
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 will see the butter
spend
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spent
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 for
poor
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the poor
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planning
Plan what you will say before you write.
structure
Have a clear intro, body with space for two sides, and a short ending.
coherence
Use simple linking words like and, but, also, however to join points.
grammar
Check spell and grammar so your point is easy to read.
idea
The topic is clear and you talk about both good and bad sides.
structure
There is a plan to show what can be good and bad.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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