The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
The image below depicts the life cycle of a salmon, from a newborn to an adult. Salmons generally lay their eggs in
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estuary. Incubation is a phase where they are in eggs. After that comes emergence, in which they are very tiny and they are dependent on their parents. Later, once they are capable enough to swim in the stream , they leave the estuary and move to the ocean, where they migrate to rearing areas for their growth and maturation. Eventually, roaming around in the ocean, a young and mature fish find their partner and decide to go back to the estuary where they can breed and keep their species alive. In short, salmon are birth in rivers where they prepare to move to the ocean for their adult life , and they end up coming back to give back more like them to the ecosystem.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Life cycle
  • Salmon
  • Spawn
  • Egg
  • Alevin
  • Fry
  • Parr
  • Smolt
  • Freshwater
  • Saltwater
  • Adaptation
  • Physiological changes
  • Habitat
  • Predators
  • Survival
  • Ecosystem
  • Migratory patterns
  • Reproductive cycle
  • Environmental factors
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