the chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the
number
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of men and
women
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in
further
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education
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in Britain in three periods, and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.
Overall
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, from 1970 to 1990, it is an increase in the
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of females in Britain with both full-time and part-time,
while
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males who were studying full-time had the same situation. In the same period,the
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of males in part-time
education
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declined in 1980/81 before slightly recovering in 1990/91. In 1970, the
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of males in
further
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education
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with part-time studying in Britain was 1000, and decreased to 860 in the next year,
then
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there was a slight climb to 900 in 1990. In full-time studying, the
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of men was continually growing from around 150 to 250 from 1970 to 1990. There was a steady rise in the
number
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of
women
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who were in
further
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education
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. The
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of
women
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who had part-time studies was growing from about 760 to 1500 from 1970 to 1990,
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the
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of
women
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who had full-time studies was growing from about 70 to 250.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 81%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, women, education with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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