Two charts illustrate the life of
students
who graduated Use synonyms
an
ordinary Australian school in 3 different years.
Change preposition
from an
Overall
, most Linking Words
students
became employed after graduation, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
small
Correct article usage
a small
amount
of them stayed unemployed.
In 1980, half of the people who continued their studies indicated Check wording
number
significantly
results in their Replace the word
significant
career
. Fix the agreement mistake
careers
While
40 Linking Words
percent
of learners got into different job places. Whilst some of them Change the spelling
per cent
was
unemployed and depicted 10%
In 1990, there was a significant drop in prolonging study time Correct subject-verb agreement
were
to
38%. Change preposition
than
On the other hand
, a number of Linking Words
students
Use synonyms
employed
and the rate indicated 50%. Verb problem
were employed
Linking Words
Also
the Add a comma
Also,
amount
of jobless Check wording
number
students
increased by 2%
By 2000, there was a Use synonyms
dramatically
growth in the Replace the word
dramatic
amount
of employed Check wording
number
student
, 55% respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
students
Additionally
, there was a Linking Words
drastically
change in the number of unemployed people. Additional studies rate dropped unnoticeably to 37%Replace the word
drastic