The table bellow illustrates UK participation in selected sports by gender between 2005/06 and 2008/09. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table bellow illustrates UK participation in selected sports by gender between 2005/06 and 2008/09. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table bellow illustrates UK participation in selected sports by gender between 2005/06 and 2008/09. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data represent the participation in selected
sports
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in the UK from June 2005 to September 2008.
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,
according to
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the table,
men
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tend to be more active in most
sports
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, apart from swimming or diving, where Women dominate, but jogging is the least popular for both genders. Male-dominated athletics are cycling and running-including activities. Attendance in Cycling by males has increased gradually over the survey period, reaching 14,4% in September 2008, which is the highest percentile reached by
men
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in any sport throughout the time
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recorded, meanwhile, female presence has slightly decreased in June 2005, being more than a twofold less than the male highest point, and in September 2008, being 6,5%. Jogging and other
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that include running,
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as cross-country or road running, are less popular among male participants than cycling and have not drastically changed over time. The highest percentage reached is in July 2006 at 7,8% and the lowest is just a little over a year prior at 6,9%. Female interest had a slight fluctuation, starting at 3,5% and finishing with 4,8%. Both
men
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and women partake in swimming and diving pretty actively, compared to the other selected plays;
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, females take up a bigger proportion.
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female concurrence in swimming or diving has decreased, it still holds a considerably high interest, in 2005 being 18% and in 2008 being 16,5%.
Men
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,
while
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not beating women in the swimming
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,
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hold a pretty good position, over the time period maintaining the percentage at 12,2-13,3%

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, men with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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