Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced number of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

We live in

digital

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a digital

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era, where

people

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cummunicate

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communicate

with each other through social

media

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such

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as email and messages.

Due to

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that

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people

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, people

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don't like to spend more

time

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to visit

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visiting

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their friends. Because of

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it,

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their social lives

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are

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impacted by negative effects. From my point of

view

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view,

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can

also

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leads

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lead

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us towards disaster.

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my perspective, social

media

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help

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helps

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us to connect with the world. It plays

pivotal

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a pivotal

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role in

life

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the lives

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of common

people

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addition

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addition,

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there are significant

application

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applications

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who

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that

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help every normal person to become proficient in

his

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their

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life.

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Furthermore

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reduce

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reduces

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poverty in those who are talented in blogging, editing, web development

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, as

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well as in entertaining. They post content on their own account at various applications like

youtube

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YouTube

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instagram

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Instagram

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snapchat

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and Facebook and

eran

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earn

expenses to live.

Particulay

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Particularly

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media

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, media

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give

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gives

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fundamental right to everyone we can give

our

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their

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opinion with the help of

tiktok

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TikTok

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some

people

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believe that social

media

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isolates

individual

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individuals

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other

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others

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claim that it

connect

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connects

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people

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around the globe. I agree that social

media

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may

leads

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lead

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humen

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human

emotions towards

negative

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the negative

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side. Despite it still depends on us how we can

setup

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set up

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our

time

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management.

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BBC News,

normal

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the normal

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human body almost 80 percent reduce stress during the

time

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with

his

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their

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family. So we say that social

media

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does

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not have

negative

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a negative

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impact on our

life

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lives

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. It depends on us how we

implement

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use

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our

time

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to use it. From the recent year survey,

scientist

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scientists

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found that the common reason

which

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that

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isolates us is

loniness

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loneliness

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Oct 17, 2025

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task response

Begin with a clear view on the issue in the intro and keep this view in all body parts. Do not switch sides without clear reason.

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Give 2 or 3 clear ideas. Put one idea in each paragraph. Give reason and a small example.

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Finish with a short conclusion that repeats your view.

language

Use simple words and short sentences. Check grammar and spellings.

content

The essay shows some effort to discuss both sides.

structure

There are some linking words such as While and Despite used in places.

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Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

255 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

digital communication
face-to-face interactions
superficial relationships
social bonds
non-verbal cues
text-based communication
tone of voice
facial expressions
body language
digital presence
real-life relationships
deterioration
long-distance relationships
misunderstandings
emotional richness

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