The pie chart below shows the percentage of ad spending by different kinds of media in India from 2012 to 2017.

The pie chart below shows the percentage of ad spending by different kinds of media in India from 2012 to 2017.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart below shows the percentage of ad spending by different kinds of media in India from 2012 to 2017.
The
bie
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pie
charts provide key information about the proportion of ad spending by different kinds of media in India in the years ranging from 2012 to 2017. The units are measured in percentages.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that
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a TV to present
ads
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had the highest ratio in both years,
whereas
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ad spending by cinema represented the lowest percentages.
According to
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what is shown in the first graph in 2012,
ads
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illustrated in Tv
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was
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populare
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popular
in the past.
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there was a
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paper
had
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that had
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38%. Digital, outdoor, and radio had less than 10% to
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in
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the people. Cinema did not
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any effect. In terms of 2017,
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can be seen from the diagram
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, usa
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a TV
remined
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remained
stable, but there was a slight
increased
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and
reach
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reached
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45%. But
otherwise
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, there was
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a decrease
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in print ad
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to 30%. It can be observed that there was a sharp increase in
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the proportion
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in
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of
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digital
ads
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. Outdoor and radio still
remaind
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remain
less than 10%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ads with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • media
  • spend
  • share
  • percent
  • year
  • period
  • trend
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
  • growth
  • decline
  • peak
  • dip
  • growth
  • lead
  • surpass
  • overlap
  • remain
  • stay
  • change
  • contrast
  • compare
  • overall
  • reason
  • because
  • as
  • result
  • India
  • 2012
  • 2017
  • advertising
  • online
  • offline
  • TV
  • radio
  • newspapers
  • magazines
  • outdoor
  • online
  • digital
  • mobile
  • growth
  • decline
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