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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in 5 Australia cities

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in 5 Australia cities
This
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 bar chart illustrates information about Australians' habits for eating or drinking tea and
coffee
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 in five cities over the
last
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 four weeks.
Overall
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, the largest proportion of
people
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 hung out in
cafes
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,
whereas
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 the smallest of them tended to buy fresh
coffee
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 in all cities during that period. Going to
cafes
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 was very common among Australian
people
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. In
Melbourne
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, around 65% of
people
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 went to
cafes
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,
while
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 going to
cafes
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 was the least advocate in Adelaide, which was less than 50%. Hobart, Sydney, and Brisbane were in the next ranks.
Moreover
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, about 55% of residents bought instant
coffee
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 in Hobart,
whereas
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 it was noticed to be around 45% in Sydney.
Furthermore
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, the number of
people
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 who consumed instant
coffee
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 in
Melbourne
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 and Adelaide was approximately equal. More than half of the population in Brisbane purchased instant
coffee
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.
In addition
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, buying fresh
coffee
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 had fewer advocates. It was reported that about 45% of
people
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 in Sydney bought fresh
coffee
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.
In contrast
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, less than 35% of
people
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 drank fresh
coffee
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 in Brisbane and Adelaide. The number of
people
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 who bought fresh
coffee
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 in
Melbourne
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 and Hobart was around 43% and 38%, respectively. All in all,
it is clear that
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 hanging out in
cafes
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 was very popular among Australians, and
Melbourne
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 was very famous for
this
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 recreational activity.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, people, cafes, melbourne with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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