Some people believe that is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health Others believe that governments should make sure that citizen is healthy. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

4.The authors conclude that the β1-AR has a clear role in cardiac output. When

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receptor is absent, the heart loses its normal chronotropic and inotropic responses, and many mice do not survive. As they note “in

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model, β2-AR plays only a minor part in heart’s response to catecholamines.” Notably, both receptors are linked to Gs proteins and activate adenylate cyclase, but their roles are not the same

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each subtype has its own purpose, as stated. They

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model is a source

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cardiovascular changes in disease.

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task

Add a short start that tells what the work is about and a short end that sums the view.

coherence

Put the main ideas in a clear order. Each point should be clear and linked to the next.

content

Give more detail or examples to back up the points.

language

Fix grammar and use simple, clear language.

coherence

Use simple linking words like first, also, but, and finally to guide the reader.

content

The text shows specific facts from the study, like the role of beta1-AR and beta2-AR.

coherence

It uses phrases such as Notably and as they note to show linking.

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There is a concrete example about mice survival.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

94 words

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