The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph
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manufacturing
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the manufacturing
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of various types of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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petroleum recorded the highest percentages whole
period
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.
Figure
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The figure
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of
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for
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natural
gas
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the figure remained relatively stable
and
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, and
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a noticeable upward trend can be observed. The coal rate fluctuated significantly
,
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;
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it hit a
lowest
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low
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point
at the end
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of the
period
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At the beginning of the
period
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, in 1981, coal
production
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was relatively high, at around 80
units
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,
while
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gas
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and oil stood at approximately 40 and 100
units
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respectively. Over the following decade,
gas
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production
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rose gradually, and oil output increased slightly.
In contrast
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, coal
production
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declined sharply in the early 1980s. I By 2000,
gas
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production
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had almost doubled compared to its initial level, reaching around 100
units
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. Oil
production
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remained the highest
overall
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, peaking at about 140
units
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. Meanwhile, coal output continued to decrease throughout the
period
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, dropping to roughly 35
units
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by the end.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words period, gas, production, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • fuel types
  • trend
  • fluctuating
  • dominant
  • period
  • rise
  • decline
  • context
  • spikes
  • drops
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