As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that the user should cover the costs. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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cars

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ownership

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significantly around the world, and will affect

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systems drastically. It is argued that the

government

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should cover the

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system

costs

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while

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others think

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consumers

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have an obligation to preserve the

road

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with some taxes. In

this

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essay, I will discuss both views and give my humble opinion. On the one hand,

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systems

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one of the most

major

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and vital

infrastructure

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infrastructures

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in every

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. The existence of roads will increase

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economic growth

and

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networks will enhance

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culture

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a country.

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, Indonesia constructed major toll roads from

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recently in the

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10 years, and

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policy created a huge

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for

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economic growth. Indonesia's GDP increased almost 6 per cent in 2022, and Indonesia became the

most

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highest GDP in

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Asia in 2023. Based on

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condition, the

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should

spent

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their funds to develop more roads because

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gain

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many benefits from

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policy.

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systems require to preservation

regularly

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to mitigate harmful effects. When many vehicles use the

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, it will

damaging

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the

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slowly.

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, vehicle users should cover the preservation cost to assist the

goverment

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government

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, in some countries in

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Asia, car owners will pay some

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bills annually to

local

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government

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due to

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preservation.

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, these

regulation

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will reduce

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and infrastructure

costs

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. In conclusion, the

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should cover the

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costs

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regularly because

they

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always

gain

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gains

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economical

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, socio-cultural, and political benefits from

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infrastructure.

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not

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mandatory for civilians to cover the

costs

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because the

government

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have more benefits from the

economical

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economic

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activities.

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Oct 23, 2025

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task

Plan the essay with a short plan. Put your view in a clear line in the last part of the intro. Give two clear ideas for both sides. End with your own view.

coherence

Make links clear. Start each paragraph with what you will talk about. Then add a fact or idea. Finish with a line that ties to your view.

task

You show both sides of the issue.

coherence

You give some good real examples from real world.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

278 words

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