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The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2000, 2005 and 2010 about one university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides key information about the percentage of students giving good ratings for different aspects of a university over the decade spanning 2000 to 2010.
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 visual representation allows for a detailed examination of student satisfaction trends across specific university provisions during that period.
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, it is clear from the graph that print resources and electronic resources have the highest proportion of
students
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students'
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 grades in
2010
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2010,
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for
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 about 88%.
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, a middle ground in terms of reported satisfaction levels. Most notably, the range of modules offered consistently registered the lowest satisfaction rate among all the evaluated areas.
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 what is shown,
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the technical
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 quality group begins with 65% in 2000 and decreases to 63% in
2005
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grow
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grows
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 back to 69
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 2010. In terms of print
resources
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resources,
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shows
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 with growth percentage of 87%
at
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in
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 2000, 89% and 88% between
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apply
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2005 and 2010. The rest of
groups
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the groups
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has
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have
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approximate
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an approximate
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 percentage
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exept
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except
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facilities
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facilities,
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has
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which have
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 a standard rate of 70% for all years.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • results
  • university
  • 2000
  • 2005
  • 2010
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • trends
  • responses
  • time
  • significance
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