The charts below show the percentage of people working in different sectors in town A and town B in 1960, 2010.

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of

emplyees

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employees

in manufacturing , sales and

services

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town

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A and

town

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B in 1960 and 2010 .

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, the two areas showed similar proportions in 1960 .

the

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manufacturing represented the

lion

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in the two areas

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and the

services

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accounted for the smallest

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While

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in 2010 , the sales remained the smallest percentage in

town

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and

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the manufacturing remained the largest

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Firstly

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Town

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A experienced dramatic changes in the two years .

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1960 , the vast majority of the employees were in manufacturing . Surprisingly , that number dropped significantly in 2010 . Both sales and

services

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were very similar in terms of the percentage of people working there in , with 30% and 29%

recpectively

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respectively

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1960 .

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services

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experienced

sharp

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increase to 64 % in 2010 . Turning to

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b , Manufacturing was the dominant in the number of the

emplyees

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employees

at seven out of ten of the whole

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, and that number dropped slightly

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58% , but

its

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still represented the largest proportion .

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