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The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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 data displays the price of water in 5 towns in Australia.
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, when the usage charge changed from 125 KL to more than 125 KL, Adelaide and Perth prices
increaced
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increased
. The rest did not detect noticeable changes. More specifically, cities like Adelaide and
perth
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Perth
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 got higher costs when the alteration was above 125 KL.
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, Adelaide went from 0.42$ to 1$, which
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 about 0.58$ more cents.
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 Perth rose significantly to approximately 1.5$,
tripple
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triple
 the previous price.
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, the three remaining cities did not change from the prior
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 after.
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in
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 contrast, whilst Melbourne and Sydney have not shown any
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extra cents, Brisbane only increased by 0.04$.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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