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The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA.

The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA.
The table provides data about the three states (
California
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, Utah and Florida) in the USA, focusing on mean
income
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 per person, the age distribution of the population, and the percentage of
people
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 living below the poverty line.
Overall
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, the percentage of average
income
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 per person in
California
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 was slightly higher than in Florida,
while
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 Utah had a considerably lower figure.
Similarly
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, the percentage of
people
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 living below the poverty line was greatest in
California
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 among the three states. In
California
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, the proportion of
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teenagers was considerably higher than that of seniors, at 17% and 13% respectively.
Although
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 the proportion of
people
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 living in poverty was higher than in the other two states,
California
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 had the greatest average
income
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 per individual, at $23,000.
By contrast
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, the proportion of young
people
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 under 18 in Utah was significantly higher than in Florida, at 28% and 16% respectively. In terms of mean
income
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 per person, Utal recorded the lowest figure compared to others, at $17,000.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words california, income, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "considerably" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • disparities
  • correlate
  • socio-economic factors
  • demographic
  • economic prosperity
  • variance
  • indicators
  • social welfare programs
  • economic development
  • policy-making
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