The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
THE DIAGRAMS PROVIDE KEY INFORMATION ABOUT THE PHASES AND EQUIPMENT
THAT IS
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REQUIRED IN THE
CEMENT
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-MAKING PROCESS.
MOREOVER
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, HOW
CEMENT
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IS UTILIZED TO CREATE CONCRETE FOR BUILDING PURPOSES. AT GLANCE, THE JOURNEY PRODUCTION IS A MULTI-STAGE, CLOSED-LOOP PROCESS. THE INITIAL STAGE FOR
CEMENT
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PRODUCTION IS CRUSHING LIMESTONE AND CLAY TOGETHER.
WHILE
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THE LATTER STEP IS GRINDING THE
CEMENT
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. WITH REGARD TO THE CONCRETE PROCEDURE, IS THE MIX
CEMENT
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WITH OTHER INGREDIENTS
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IN TERMS OF
CEMENT
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PRODUCTION,
INITIALLY
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, CRUSHING THE CLAY WITH THE LIMESTONE BY A CRUSHER,
AS A RESULT
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, IT PRODUCE A POWDER.
THEN
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THIS
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POWDER IS MIXED IN A MIXER TO A ROTATING HEATER, FOLLOWED BY THE GRINDER.
FINALLY
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, IT PRODUCE THE BAGS OF
CEMENT
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.
ACCORDING TO
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WHAT IS SHOWN IN THE SECOND DIAGRAM, TO CREATE THE CONCRETE, IT IS A SIMPLE STEPS, BY USING A CONCRETE MIXER TO BLEND VARIOUS CATEGORIES, INCLUDING FIFTEEN PERCENT OF
CEMENT
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, WITH A TENTH OF WATER AND A QUARTER OF SAND. FOLLOWED BY HALF GRAVEL, WHICH ARE SMALL STONES.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cement with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Crushed powder
  • Rotating heater
  • Grinding
  • Mixer
  • Furnace
  • Packaging
  • Proportion
  • Gravel
  • Rotating concrete mixer
  • Raw materials
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