Some people think enjoying the presennt is more important that planning for the future for both countries and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that planning for the

future

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sigificant

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significant

for both

countries

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and individuals.

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it is a commonly held belief that enjoying the present is more vital, there is

also

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an argument that opposes it. I consider that plan for the

future

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more substantial for the world than enjoying the present.

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with,

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people

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people,

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not like

animals

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animals,

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live just for

enjoing

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enjoying

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, we have to use our mind to improve our

live

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lives

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and

earth

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the earth

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better

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a better

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place for us and our children in the

future

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because after

period

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a period

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of time we will be sad

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about

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that

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the

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time

when

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apply

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spend

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spent

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on bad ways.

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put

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putting

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plans for your

live

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life

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makes you in

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a batter

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batter

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better

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place and someday when you see the

result

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result,

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you will be happy.

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, if

study

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you study

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hard and start with a good plan after

finsh

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finishing

the studying will get a great

jop

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job

. Another point to consider, some

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apply

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countries

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make

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made

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a map in the

past

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past,

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now it is from developed

countries

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. It is possible to say that

develpoment

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development

helps us to be more cheerful because we have everything.

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modren

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modern

countries

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has

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have

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jops opprotunities

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job opportunities

than others that come from good planning.

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according to

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the Saudi Ministry of

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Labour

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80% of

people

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who work are happy. In conclusion, despite

people

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having different views, I believe that planning

extremely

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is more

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important than enjoying.

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people

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People

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who forget about planning for

there

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their

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future

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apply

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can cause issues for them after a

while

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Also

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Also,

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people

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should enjoy

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apply

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there

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their

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free time wisely.

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Oct 27, 2025

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There is a logical flow with connect words like 'To begin with' and 'In addition'.

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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