it is suggested that all young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work, helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the young people?

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should

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voluntarily for the benign of the

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making the

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do unpaid

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can have certain disadvantages, I consider that its benefits far outweigh its drawbacks. Undoubtedly, doing unpaid

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for the

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would be beneficial for the

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in many ways.

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, by helping the elderly, the sick and the disabled directly

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, or participating in charitable activities like raising funds or offering free consultation, young people will certainly gain and accumulate some valuable first-hand experience. The second benefit would be that it would make them feel more connected to

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society. There would be a sense of ownership for the society among the

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for the

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as they

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for its betterment.

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, volunteering provides a natural sense of accomplishment.

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's role as a volunteer can

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give them a sense of pride and identity. It would make the

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feel better about themselves and

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make them more self-confident. The better they feel about themselves, the more likely they are to have a positive view of their life and future goals.

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disadvantages if the young provide free service helping people in need.

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, it may conflict with their normal study or

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,

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might feel burdened and forcing them might create a feeling of resentment among the

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rather than create a feeling of self-confidence and

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that

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undertaking some voluntary

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would be very beneficial despite the few drawbacks.