In some countries, young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard on their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years , it has become apparent that adults have

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little

free time because they devote most of their time studying .

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essay will examine the main causes of

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issue and

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solution

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major cause of

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is the

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of students by

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. Younger students who are treated as older

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are often exposed to serious

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diseases from an early age ,

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as depression. Which is commonly

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exhibited

among new generations.

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, depression

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considered

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one of the most harmful diseases, which must be tackled once

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the symptoms .

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major cause of

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is the high

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expectations

of parents towards their

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. Parents

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often put their

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under

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extreme

pressure by high

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expectations

regarding the educational

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superiority

. Take my friend as an example , his family always care about his grades

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is natural

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his family

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exceeded

the normal care and put him in a serious situation

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it is clear that

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he will

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their

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ambitions

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, every

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has a

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, when we want to find a

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to a

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, we should look at the roots of the

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. So , what

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do

you think about the causes of

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by the teachers ?

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believe the main source of

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problem

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is that

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may

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to similar

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when they were

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, and after many

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years,

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they found that the approaches were practical and effective .

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,

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is

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increase

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them that the methods that were applied many years ago , it not

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necessarily

that are viable today . In conclusion ,

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dealing

with

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young people

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as if they were adults is a big

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that

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to

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by

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the awareness of the

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.

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, parents should

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realise

the

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consequences

of putting their

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under pressure .