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The table below presents the perceptions of CEOs and their partners/spouses as to the main causes of stress in the CEO lifestyle. Items are expressed as percentages and more than one response was permitted. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below presents the perceptions of CEOs and their partners/spouses as to the main causes of stress in the CEO lifestyle. Items are expressed as percentages and more than one response was permitted. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The data provides information on various factors that were
precieved
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perceived
 by
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CEO
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the CEO
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 and their partners as the reasons for
stress
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 in the lifestyle.
Overall
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,
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work- related
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work-related
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 travel , overload from
work
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 and long working hours were causes of increased
stress
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according to
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 the spouses. Meanwhile, demands of
work
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 on private life and relationship with family were considered to be
main
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the main
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 reason for
stress
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 by
CEO
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's . Time and deadlines had almost equal votes
by
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from
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both
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the
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apply
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groups.
However
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, interpersonal relations and taking
work
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 home were
the
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amongst
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among
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 the least selected categories. In terms of spouses,
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work - related
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work-related
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 travel was
greatest
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the greatest
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 cause of increased
stress
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 in lifestyle
with
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, with
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 over 87 %
percieved
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perceived
 it as the problem. Followed by
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work -related
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work-related
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stress
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 ,
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work - related
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work-related
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 travel and long
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working hours had the highest percentage compared to other reasons, which was equal to 62 % for
both
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.
On the contrary
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,
CEO
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's
percieved
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perceived
 demands of
work
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 on private life as the biggest
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stress causing
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stress-causing
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 contributor with a figure equal to 68%. The factors which
recieved
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received
 the least votes were interpersonal
relationship
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relationships
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 and taking
work
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 home
having
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, having
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 a range of 21% to 25 % by
both
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the
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apply
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groups. Deadlines
was
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were
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 known to be equally responsible
to increase
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for increasing
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stress
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both
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in both
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the
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apply
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groups
with
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, with
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 percentage equal to 52 %
voted
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by
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from
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CEO
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the CEO
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 and 60 % votes from their wives.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ceo, stress, work, both with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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