The line graph shows visit to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK resident in 1999. gp

The line graph shows visit to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK resident in 1999. gp
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph shows visit to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK resident in 1999. gp
The line graph gives information about the
number
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of people arriving and leaving the
UK
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for holiday, and the bar charts illustrate the countries preferred by citizens of the
UK
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for going abroad between 1971 and 1999.
Overall
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, the
number
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of immigrants who went
UK
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steadily increased, and simultaneously the
number
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of holidayed in the United Kingdom dramatically increased again throughout the given period. The British mostly preferred to be in France,
while
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only a few of them were happy to go to Turkey. First of all, around 10
million
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foreigners came to the United Kingdom in 1979, still around triple of them did in 1999.
On the other hand
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, the
number
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of individuals who departed from the
UK
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to overseas
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increased from over 10
million
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to 20
million
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between 1979 to 1984,
then
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sharply rose to 30
million
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for 5 years. After that, it reached more than 50,000,000 in 1999, as it tended to grow. Among these figures, below than 20
million
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wanted to visit France or Spain, but fewer than 15
million
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answered that they were satisfied to go on vacation in the USA, Greece or Turkey.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, uk, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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