One long-distance flight consumes fuel which a car uses in several years' time, but they cause the same amount of pollution. So some people think that we should discourage non-essintial flights, such as tourist travel, rather than to limit the use of cars. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Air

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travel consumes an enormous

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of fuel compared with

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, and both

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transport contribute significantly to environmental

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.

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, some people believe that non-essential

flights

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,

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as those for tourism, should be restricted rather than limiting car use. I completely agree with

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some disagree

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Flights

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cause more

pollution

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than

cars

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.

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,

airplanes

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burn a very large

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of fuel, especially on long trips.

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makes the

air

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dirtier and increases global warming.

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, one long flight can produce the same

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of carbon dioxide as a car produces in several years.

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,

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amount

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of fuel which

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use

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for

cars

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for

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time is consumed by only one long flight. If we reduced tourist

flights

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, there would be less smoke and the

air

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would be cleaner for everyone.

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, restricting

flights

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may be useful than limiting

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cars

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for environment.

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,

cars

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also

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cause serious

pollution

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every day.

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to say, millions of

cars

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are used around the world, and they release harmful gases into the

air

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all the time.

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daily

pollution

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from

cars

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is much greater than the

pollution

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from a few tourist

flights

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.

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, in big cities, there are

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many traffic jams and vehicles on the road.

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, the

air

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is often dirty

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cars

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. If the government did not

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limit

the vehicles, the environmental

pollution

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would

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at the same level which was before.

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,

instead

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of only focusing on

flights

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, it is better to

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control car use. In conclusion,

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cars

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produce

pollution

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the same planes, reducing tourist

flights

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can help protect the environment. People can still enjoy travelling by using greener ways of transport.