You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .................,

Dear

Mr.

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John, I am writing

this

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the furniture in your home. I've been living in the house for the

last

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decade with my family. I live in a rented apartment

that is

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situated in Brampton city with my husband and two children. Nowadays, I am facing tremendous problems

due to

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furniture.

Firstly

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, the stove in the kitchen is not working properly

which

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takes ages to cook food.

Secondly

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, the washing machine not only cleaned my clothes

thorouoghly

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thoroughly

, but

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showed some errors.

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, the front door is not locked properly because it is getting old. I will

appreicate

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appreciate

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you install a new stove and washing machine as well. It is the best idea if you repair the front door. So, I can live in the apartment for a long time. I am looking forward to your positive consideration. Yours faithfully, Rupinder Kau.

rupindersamrow222

Oct 31, 2025

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grammar

Check the grammar and spelling so what you want is clear. Use proper words for 'furniture', 'repair', and 'wash' to avoid mix up.

structure

Make the problems clear and order them. Each sentence can name one issue.

content

Ask for action with a time limit, for example 'Please fix this by next week' to help you.

coherence

Split the letter into 2 or 3 short paragraphs: intro, problems, and what you want. It helps the reader.

format

The letter has a formal start and end: Dear ... and Yours faithfully.

layout

You use words like First, Then, and Third to show order.

content

You clearly state what action you want the landlord to take.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

150 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Dear
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction
regarding
the condition
furniture
belongings
for instance
damaged
broken
worn-out
appliance
household items
it is unacceptable
inconvenient
inhabitable
affecting
negatively
urgent attention
replacement
repair
resolve
maintenance
prompt response
Thank you for your attention
Yours sincerely

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