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The chart below shows the number of men and women (in thousand) in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of men and women (in thousand) in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure presents
men
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's and
women
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's enrollment in
further
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education
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 over the three decades from 1970 to 1991 in Britain.
Overall
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, males dominated in part-time
education
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 throughout the first two periods, but
women
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 surpassed
men
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 in the third one.
However
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, both genders showed a constant increase in full-time
education
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, but with a slight advantage for females. In the first period, males were higher than
women
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 in part-time
education
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 , with 1000 students, whilst females had around 800. But in 1980/81,
women
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 jumped to above 800,
whereas
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men
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 dropped to above 800 with a small gap.
Subsequently
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,
women
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 outnumbered
men
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 dramatically by reaching around 1200,
whereas
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men
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 rose a little bit than in the second period.
On the other hand
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, in full-time
education
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 , males in 1970/71 were estimated to be under 200, even though
women
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 , who were under that , with a small gap, their number in the second period, climbed to above 200, whilst
men
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 stayed under 200. But ten years after their number rose to above 200.
While
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women
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 increased a little bit than before.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, education with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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