The chart belows gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018

The chart belows gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart belows gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018
The bar chart illustrates how households in a specific country allocated their weekly income across various categories in 1968 and 2018.
Overall
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,
food
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was the largest area of spending in 1968,
while
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in 2018,
leisure
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and housing became the most significant categories. In 1968,
food
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accounted for the largest share, at 35%. Housing, clothing and footwear each made up about 10%. Spending on
leisure
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was just under 10%,
while
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transport and personal goods were around 5%. Fuel and power
also
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represented a minor share.
By contrast
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, in 2018, the highest proportion of income was spent on
leisure
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, exceeding 20%, followed closely by housing.
Food
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spending dropped to under 20%, showing a significant decline. Transport became more prominent,
while
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clothing and footwear saw the biggest reduction. Personal goods and fuel remained the smallest categories, both under 5%. In summary, over the 50-year period, family spending priorities shifted from basic necessities like
food
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and clothing to
leisure
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and housing, indicating lifestyle and economic changes.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, leisure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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