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The chart below compares the changes in the share of international graduates in Canadian provinces during the period of five years 2001-2006

The chart below compares the changes in the share of international graduates in Canadian provinces during the period of five years 2001-2006
The bar chart shows the percentage of overseas
students
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 in Canada between 2001 and 2006, and the figures are divided into eight different locations.
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, the number of foreign
students
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 increased for five years in every suburb. Most
students
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 from other countries studied in New Brunswick in 2006,
while
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 the fewest of them graduated in Ontario in 2006. First of all, the population of international
students
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 in British Columbia were a little less than 5% of the total in 2001, but it jumped more than double in 2006, which ranked as the second place among all represented data. The smallest growth was observed in Quebec, from around 7% to 9% for 5 years.
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, in three main areas, which were New Brunswick, Nova Scotia, and Quebec, over 5 per cent of foreigners enrolled respectively in 2001, as the other five of them took less than that at the same time.
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, the trend of rising in Manitoba and Newfoundland and Labrador remained at the same level throughout the given period.

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