The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

The diagram below illustrates the amount of

waste

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produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

Waste

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tonnes

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Firstly

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company

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A had the most

waste

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between the three

comapny's

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between 2000 and 2005 by 12

tonnes

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, in its next 10

years

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it had decayed to 8

tonnes

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in 2015.

Also

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company

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B saw an increase from 2000 to 2005

starting

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from 9

tonnes

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going

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up to 10

tonnes

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in 2005,

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its rest year saw a significant decrease to 3

tonnes

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in 2015.

Secondly

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company

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starting

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with the lowest

waste

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2000

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2000,

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tonnes

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and between 2005 to 2015 saw a big hike

reaching

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apply

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tonnes

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in 2015.

Overall

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, both

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company

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companies

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A and B saw a massive fluctuation starting from 2005.

While

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company

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C saw a slight increase from 2000 to 2005, and

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from

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2010 to 2015,

saw

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a massive gain.

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company

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A and

company

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B produced the most

waste

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in 2000. And

at the end

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2015

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2015,

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company

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C was the highest

between

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among

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them.

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Nov 5, 2025

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.

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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

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NOWADAYS MANY PEOPLE CHOOSE TO BE SELF-EMPLOYED, RATHER THAN TO WORK FOR A COMPANY OR ORGANIZATION. WHY MIGHT THIS BE THE CASE? WHAT COULD BE THE DISADVANTAGES OF BEING SELF-EMPLOYED?

Many countries spend a lot of money on art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say the money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.